sitting
reading
the cries of
the best & worst
of friend with friend
hate & love (or hate for love?)
don't know if I've seen
passion or poison
helpless.
"you can't
have what I have
that's what have means
if you had it
it would be what
you have
and not mine
something different."
sounds
hoarse yet clear
far yet near
cruel yet dear.
real nonetheless
but: (!)
feel.
feelings think not
oft they lie.
twixt smile and blade
hidden in tongue
caressed with
careful murderous
flattery.
comrades in/to arms!
"kill all but
save
mine!"
Horrible word at times:
"mine".
That started the whole ball rolling.
"Mine" & "No"
Self interest and self will:
Two concepts fast learnt
by infants, bureaucrats and imbeciles.
similar yet different (those folk);
in their strife of dominance
they cut those they love.
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wow em, dats so deep! explain to me what is the background of this poem? verry interesting aproach dude
kj xox
tanx. wellll
>Typing it out...
is like fighting it out - online
1. me "listening" 2 the fight - knowing friends are hurting each other, but unable to do enyting bout it.
2. They're fighting over wut they both want.
3. they both hurt so much cuz they respect each other, but ther wordz cut real deep - since they know each other so very well. (too well?)
4 & 5. cuz their feeling r so strong, hey believe they must be real. but feelings have no fact unless you give it to them. taken in by this lie, these friens lash out at each other, wanting not to lose wut they think they have.
6 to end. eventully, they only kno is that theyre grabbing wuts "theirs" - and so, theyr like children, sillies or politicians. (All who hurt people they shouldn't, like their friends)
Does that work?
wow yea i understand, thats so ... well im speacjless and thats a rare think I TALK A HELL OF ALOT!!! lol!!!! thats awesome em well done (like a steak!) lol na jis kidden (not like a steak :P)
kj xox
oh and em, why for do you have a map of kooweerup as a link on your site :P lol, i go to kooweerup seconday collage in victoria australia, dat amazin!
kj xox
hey and im a link too!!!:D omg! thanx dude!!!! *so proud:D*
as well as shez n dan :D
much love dude
kj xox
p.s how do i link? imma wanna link you! :D
yes i wuld also like to link!!! woowwwwwww, im LOOOVIN!!! this poem dude, tis shagtastic!!!!!!! like a steak! lol, i dnt get it kj??????
look on my site at em's comment and u shall get it
kj xox
ooooooooo i c.....hey em. u can see my street on that map of koo-wee-rup ya got ova there! amazement.
hey there, my name is butterz well actually cindy but kj and shez no me as butterz so i gess u can no me as butterz 2!!! lol
well anywho, i noticed ur name on kj and shez's blogs quite a bit so i thought id check ur blog out!!! i really like this, i think its amazingly awesome... as kj said "deep"... its really really good!!!
well anywho i must be bouncin now i gotsta go and put sum more shit on my own blog... coz i havent done much on there 4 a while so ill say goodbye 4 now
much luv
butterz (or cindy... which eva one tickles ur fancy!!)
xoxoxoxoxoxoxox
yer imma ticklish sumtimes also......
KJ:
Nottaprob. LOL. Well done steak is OK - I like it enyway. Map is cuz not many ppl know Kooweerup (cludin me), so I put it there. So there's a Koo Kolledge, but it's in Victoria? The links...I figgured I wuz talking 2 all you, so a link seems polite - no?. Smashplate therapy...hmmmmm... (eyebrows arched maniacally)
Link structions 2 follow...
Shez:
tuxcjke (oops fingas onnarong keyz) TICKLE. I don know which one is your street - so ur safe! LOL. The poem's bout some ppl I met online - told KJ wut it meant. OK
butterz:
hey. Ya, we been talking 4 some time now. Tanx 4 the props. Write about lotsa different subjex. Sometimes I actually get paid 4 it.
Link structions:
1. Login to your blog
http://_yourblognamehere_.blogger.com
2. After you login, you are at:
http://www.blogger.com/blog-options-basic.g?blogID=########
(where ######## = your blog's numeric ID)
3. Choose the "template" edit tab
http://www.blogger.com/template-edit.g?blogID=########
heh...I jis saw that u had already figgured out how to link.
glad u did, cuz the rest of the structions are harder 2 splain.
Tanx 4 the link KJ!
hey ima friend of bothe kj and shez as well of butterz. same as her i was noticing your comments on there blogs and figured id check u out lol! i love the poem and the meaning behind it (kj miss ya heaps and heaps) than for an amazin blog for all to read
ash xo
doo bee doo bee doo...ey em. imma in maths not much maths goin on here lol...in that little skool on the map of koowee ova der...tis very noisy anywhooooooooo
take care dude
love shez xoxoxoxo
HI- like the poem- I have come to the understanding that we always lash out at the ones we love, as we know and assume, they wil always forgive us in the end, and others will not always do that, so we would take a serious chance if we tried it on them..I want to thank you for your sweet thoughts about my son- I have posted today adn will be back soon, take good care, priorities/Lee.
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